JDM-Glenat Comic Contest 1 of 2

 J'ai réalisé 2 planches pour participer à un concours de BD organisé par le Journal de Mickey et Glénat, avec à la clé un contrat d'édition pour une prépublication et un album.
L'univers, le profil des persos, le découpage et les dialogues ont été fournis par Dab's (Tony et Alberto).

Comme le concours est terminé et que l'on ne m'a pas contacté, je suppose que je n'ai pas été pris

En même temps je sais ce qui ne va pas dans ces planches (format A4, au demeurant) et je ne pense pas qu'elles soient publiables.


 (Translation after the description)

I've made 2 pages to participate in a contest held by Le Journal de Mickey (French Walt Disney weekly comics magazine) and Glénat (a publishing house). The winner will get a contract for creating an album after a publishing in the magazing.
The universe, the characters' profiles, the story and the dialogues were brought by Dab's, a famous cartoonist.

As the contest is over and that I've not been contacted, I suppose I haven't been chosen

At the same time, I know what's wrong with these pages (A4 format, by the way) and I don't think they're good enough to be published.

Strip 1 Panel 1
Jean-Barnard (squire kid): "Can I fight that dragon? Can I?!!"
Herlebond (knight): "No! Too dangerous..."

Panel 2
H: "I know you wish to test your level of attainment, but I'm personaly responsible for your life towards your father! And I don't want you to take too many risks..."
JB: "Pff..."

Strip 2 Panel 3
H: "Wow! Not that one too! Too strong!"

Panel 4
H: "Hmm... no! Beware of this one... He's deceiptful!"
JB: "C'mon..."

Strip 3 Panel 5
JB: "So I can get my hand on this one..."
H: "So be it..."

Panel 6
H: "But you use your rubber ring!"
JB: "Pff... OK!"

Strip 4 Panel 7
H: "You can never be too careful!"
JB: "Ouh! It's cold!"